Name: Arina Ross
From: Wichita, KS
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Scriptwriting Critique Form
Your name: Arina Ross
Author/Title Laban Massey
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Is the protagonist recognizable? What is his/her/its main objective? Is it reached?
Not sure, my guess is the wizard.
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Is the conflict strong? Does it propel the action forward? Is it compelling? Are varied tactics employed?
Still needs to develop some more
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Are the voices distinct? Does the dialogue fit the action/situation of the play?
I think everyone had some distinction with them, sounded pretty good
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Is the climax identifiable? Is the tempo/pacing of the script appropriate and effective?
No climax yet
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How is the backstory and/or foreshadowing? Is it used effectively?
Got from the characters, could get more
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